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Literature Text

Mindless,
i watch you.  
Amused by your
Endless ignorance,
Confused by your lack of understanding.  

But here i am,
Mindless,
i am being watched.  
Ignorant of things
Surrounding me.  
Confused when you
Dont understand me.   
i dont like how the 2nd paragraph went. the wording doesnt flow with the 1st one.
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RainbowBriteBoy's avatar
good flow actually. really good poem